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Nice beginning (Reply to this comment)
by AliventiAsylum
you have some terrific descriptions here - I can really visualize what is happening based on your writing.
Onto the next chapter!
Patti
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Apr 05 '03
6:03 pm PST
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Earlier... (Reply to this comment)
by nedipooh
This morning I was checking out the "new reviews" in those few minutes that I have before getting ready for work, and came across your story. It was the first thing listed and I didn't realize at the time that I was actually reading the last chapter.... ackkk!!! Now that I've read the first chapter, I'm anxious to read chapter 2. You've definitely caught my interest here.
~~Nedi~~
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Apr 03 '03
2:56 pm PST
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